Because of Lyla's relationship with Lars, Gwen had felt a lonely feeling inside her, thinking that her friend Lyla abandoned her. She never talked nor looked at Lyla ever again, as if they were total strangers.
Lyla noticed the coldness that surround Gwen and her eversince she had this relationship with Lars. She then decided to reconcile with her and be friend again cause she already missed her so much.
Gwen was surprised when Lyla asked her to meet her at the park tomorrow. She never expected that Lyla would still remember her, even her name!
In the park while Gwen is waiting for Lyla, she met the overly cool guy in school, Jake. They started walking down the park, while Gwen, totally forgetting about the said meeting with Lyla, suddenly bumped into her. Lyla then decided to just let Jake join them in their reconciliation.
After a few days, Lyla and Gwen became friends again, and to everyone's surprise. Jake courted Gwen and they became a couple just like Lyla and Lars.
The four teenagers became the best of friends full of love in their hearts. <3




Nice one Patrice..:))
ReplyDeleteNice names. :D
ReplyDeleteharvest moon chracters, tekken also, but i dont know the other guy.. nice one pats :)
ReplyDeleteNice one Pats
ReplyDeletehey maria, nice.
ReplyDeleteSo long! Hahahaha. But it's niceeee :)
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ReplyDeletei love the pictures and the story is great
ReplyDeleteOH, credits to her seatmate that time haha;)
ReplyDeleteWell, in my opinion its very nice of you to put visuals of your imaginary characters for further visualization of what they look, sound or move as your story goes. I like the cool effect of the background and blending of colors here :) well, all in all good job!
the story is nice and it is well presented with pictures.. !!
ReplyDeleteNice story and I like the photos ^^
ReplyDeletegood story
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It is a nice and interesting story. Good job!
ReplyDeletegood story and nice pictures
ReplyDeleteNice story and Good photos! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteIt's nice. :)
ReplyDeletethanks to all who commented, I'll comment u back..
ReplyDeleteMaria did a good job
ReplyDeleteCool in a moment.
ReplyDeleteCOOOOOOOOOOOL :D
ReplyDeleteNice story but the background..... ._.
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